Comments on: My Writing Desk http://www.penmeapoem.com/2008/08/my-writing-desk/ Poet for Hire Tue, 24 Aug 2010 12:38:53 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Rio http://www.penmeapoem.com/2008/08/my-writing-desk/comment-page-1/#comment-145 Rio Fri, 08 Aug 2008 03:11:30 +0000 http://www.penmeapoem.com/?p=177#comment-145 Very nice imagery. You pull the reader in cleverly with the very first word. Very nice imagery. You pull the reader in cleverly with the very first word.

]]> By: Brad Frederiksen http://www.penmeapoem.com/2008/08/my-writing-desk/comment-page-1/#comment-137 Brad Frederiksen Wed, 06 Aug 2008 10:50:03 +0000 http://www.penmeapoem.com/?p=177#comment-137 I enjoyed taking part in the construction of your writing space. Wonderful attention to the rhyme. I enjoyed taking part in the construction of your writing space. Wonderful attention to the rhyme.

]]> By: Edward http://www.penmeapoem.com/2008/08/my-writing-desk/comment-page-1/#comment-136 Edward Wed, 06 Aug 2008 10:05:34 +0000 http://www.penmeapoem.com/?p=177#comment-136 My cat is a wonderful anchor to the present moment, indeed. My cat is a wonderful anchor to the present moment, indeed.

]]> By: Bev http://www.penmeapoem.com/2008/08/my-writing-desk/comment-page-1/#comment-135 Bev Wed, 06 Aug 2008 01:09:39 +0000 http://www.penmeapoem.com/?p=177#comment-135 I love this. Your thoughts were miles away from your desk until your cat interrupted you and bought you back, focussing you on your poem. If you cat hadn't interrupted you, would you still be dreaming? Bev I love this. Your thoughts were miles away from your desk until your cat interrupted you and bought you back, focussing you on your poem. If you cat hadn’t interrupted you, would you still be dreaming?

Bev

]]> By: lissa http://www.penmeapoem.com/2008/08/my-writing-desk/comment-page-1/#comment-130 lissa Mon, 04 Aug 2008 13:20:03 +0000 http://www.penmeapoem.com/?p=177#comment-130 I love the last line, "to unwrap" - that's what writing is to me anyway, once you type or write the words, new ideas and thoughts spread and open up much like an onion, where we create layers where there's none I love the last line, “to unwrap” – that’s what writing is to me anyway, once you type or write the words, new ideas and thoughts spread and open up much like an onion, where we create layers where there’s none

]]> By: Allen http://www.penmeapoem.com/2008/08/my-writing-desk/comment-page-1/#comment-126 Allen Sun, 03 Aug 2008 02:24:32 +0000 http://www.penmeapoem.com/?p=177#comment-126 Love the poem. I can see the moments through your words. Wonderful. Love the poem. I can see the moments through your words. Wonderful.

]]> By: Sascha Cooper http://www.penmeapoem.com/2008/08/my-writing-desk/comment-page-1/#comment-124 Sascha Cooper Sat, 02 Aug 2008 20:55:43 +0000 http://www.penmeapoem.com/?p=177#comment-124 This poem really captures my imagination as it fuses modern with classical writing. It has a certain Tennyson feel to it when he wrote 'The Lady of Shalott' which is my favourite poem of all time. Think with this one, you may have just knocked him off the top spot!!! A lovely inspirational read. Sascha xxx This poem really captures my imagination as it fuses modern with classical writing. It has a certain Tennyson feel to it when he wrote ‘The Lady of Shalott’ which is my favourite poem of all time. Think with this one, you may have just knocked him off the top spot!!! A lovely inspirational read.

Sascha xxx

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