Comments on: The Polish Girl

By: surika

surika — Sat, 19 Jul 2008 16:03:52 +0000

I mean…I am speachless……………………
Firstly very impressed with the reponse this poem got and secondly…..THANK YOU very muck Ed for the poem…As people say here- u could say you know me very well. I am very proud of myself now that I have a poem about me- so beautiful and outstadning (well..nobody has done it before for me so it will always be very special for me)
Thank you very much Edward
xxxxx
Marta

By: Rethabile

Rethabile — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 15:08:11 +0000

You must have known her, man. Well done.

By: Edward

Edward — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 09:50:41 +0000

Many thanks Scott.

By: Scott Killen

Scott Killen — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 03:32:36 +0000

Edward, this is very nice. I love the imagery. What opulence!

By: Edward

Edward — Sun, 13 Jul 2008 18:35:27 +0000

Thank you Nunyaa for your kind words.

I know the girl but it was purely an example of what I can write for others.

I did take a lot of inspiration from experiences in my past however.

By: Nunyaa

Nunyaa — Sun, 13 Jul 2008 17:09:40 +0000

Feels like this is from the heart.

“Just one kiss from your pretty smile I steal,
Forever then our bonded fates be sealed.”

Simply beautiful words Edward.