The Polish Girl

by Edward on July 10, 2008

in Edward's Daily Poetry Blog

The Polish Girl


Dear Marta fair, sweet Polish damozel,
Glimpse I the sea’s of Ireland in sapphire’d eyes,
Which shimmer bright and forlorn mists dispel;
Your gaze a crystal tapestry comprised.
Laughter from thy succulent crimson lips,
Caresses the air that excites my heart;
As you dance your form does the moon eclipse,
Whilst whispering romance my dreams you impart.
On a bed of sumptuousness rests a pearl,
A ladanki for honeyed tongues of ours;
Your smooth velvet skin, a flower unfurled
From heaven’s touch, gleams and fills my hours.
Just one kiss from your pretty smile I steal,
Forever then our bonded fates be sealed.

© Edward Beaman-Hodgkiss

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1 NunyaaNo Gravatar 07.13.08 at 6:09 pm

Feels like this is from the heart.

“Just one kiss from your pretty smile I steal,
Forever then our bonded fates be sealed.”

Simply beautiful words Edward.

2 EdwardNo Gravatar 07.13.08 at 7:35 pm

Thank you Nunyaa for your kind words.

I know the girl but it was purely an example of what I can write for others.

I did take a lot of inspiration from experiences in my past however.

3 Scott KillenNo Gravatar 07.15.08 at 4:32 am

Edward, this is very nice. I love the imagery. What opulence!

4 EdwardNo Gravatar 07.15.08 at 10:50 am

Many thanks Scott.

5 RethabileNo Gravatar 07.17.08 at 4:08 pm

You must have known her, man. Well done.

6 surikaNo Gravatar 07.19.08 at 5:03 pm

I mean…I am speachless……………………
Firstly very impressed with the reponse this poem got and secondly…..THANK YOU very muck Ed for the poem…As people say here- u could say you know me very well. I am very proud of myself now that I have a poem about me- so beautiful and outstadning (well..nobody has done it before for me so it will always be very special for me)
Thank you very much Edward
xxxxx
Marta

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