Remember Me

by Edward on July 11, 2008

in Edward's Daily Poetry Blog

Battle of Britain Memorial, Kent


Remember Me

Stay sleeping my love, for I’m not here long;
I want you to be strong:
The angels are singing and calling my name,
This soul they do proclaim;
I’ve come tonight my dear to say goodbye,
And for a brief moment with you close lie.

We ran to the planes, when the bell had rung,
A rushing of the young,
The smell of daisies, mixed with engine oil,
Drifted amongst our toil;
Cries of encouragement, we shouted out,
‘God bless! For our country!’ Strong hearts devout.

I’ll miss the soft touch of your crimson lips
That did my fears eclipse;
Those pale green eyes, that filled my every thought
Will soon be but distraught.
Sumptuous streaming hair, heaven’s perfume,
My yearning for you now does hope consume.

We rose as one, a blanket of aircraft,
I wish we could have laughed!
The engines roared and the wind groaned outside,
Below the ground did hide,
Beams of luminosity, danced round about,
Inside our cockpits, some feeble redoubt.

I’ll leave you with my wings, oft so proudly worn,
To give our child unborn,
One day tell him that his father had to leave,
But please don’t let him grieve.
‘I fought above England’s fertile pastures green,
So that you my son could flourish serene’.

© Edward Beaman-Hodgkiss

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1 gautami tripathyNo Gravatar 07.26.08 at 2:26 pm

Edward, good to read you again. This is very well written

Entertain me, will you?

2 Granny SmithNo Gravatar 07.26.08 at 4:33 pm

This reminds me of the poems I still love by the World War I poets such as Rupert Brooke. “If I should die think only this of me/There is some corner of a foreign field that is forever England…”

3 danniNo Gravatar 07.26.08 at 11:09 pm

very moving verse full of love and the grief of leaving it!!!

4 EdwardNo Gravatar 07.27.08 at 2:42 am

Welcome Gautami, it’s very nice to see you here.

Thank you Granny Smith and Danni for your kind words. I’m glad you liked it.

5 Brad FrederiksenNo Gravatar 07.30.08 at 2:21 pm

This provoked quite a few vivid and unexpected images for me. Very inspiring.

6 TammieNo Gravatar 07.31.08 at 4:46 am

deeply moving.

7 ShepSocreveNo Gravatar 08.03.08 at 7:05 pm

It’s amazing

8 ThomasNo Gravatar 08.26.11 at 1:45 pm

I love your poem here and it is well-written…Very inspirational…
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9 RowenaNo Gravatar 09.29.11 at 4:12 pm

PErfect poem!love to read it again and again…hope to hear more from your smart brain..
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10 Krysthal WilsonNo Gravatar 10.12.11 at 3:06 pm

Amazing ! Very good poem ! A++++ !! I hope you right more inspirational posts like this. :D
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11 LauraNo Gravatar 10.24.11 at 3:56 pm

Hello there!Your poem so mesmerizing,there’s a deep thought but simply to analyze.I love your talent,such a huge brain.Thank you for inspiring especially to those who are not with their love ones.
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12 Samantha S. PainterNo Gravatar 11.03.11 at 2:21 pm

Hi Edward,

I love your poem. I am lost for words when I read it. You’re such a brilliant poet and your poem is very well-written. Good job and thanks a lot for sharing.
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13 Zak BentleyNo Gravatar 11.17.11 at 6:33 am

Hi Edward,

You’re such a great poet! This is truly an inspirational poem and I love the rhyming words. Did you intend to write this poem to a special someone or just for fun?

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