Passers-By

July 24, 2008



A sunshine faded pebble
On the ocean bed. Once it lay
Above, upon a beach. Just like
Memories they did share.

Footsteps reclusive. Eyes languid
Gazing at the pavement, a love
Long mislaid now walking near, fate
Ascending, surface bright.

Dreams forage amongst tumbling ruins
In dark hours. Pathways distinct
With repeated use, fair dancing feet
Searching for hearts adrift,

Now slow swinging arms are so near
their wrinkled hands clenching sticks,
An embrace and flowing tears nigh,
Alas the sun is too bright.

The lights of past dance-halls, twirls,
Blinding lovers that once were.
When washed in colour and sparkling specks,
Enclosed, antiquated.

A brief relapse of music
Strokes ageing ears. A scent of old
And a whisper, glow in deep waters,
Fading, as they walk past.

Wearied legs. Aching backs
A chair for each when at home
Alone with fragile memories,
Destiny satisfied.

© Edward Beaman-Hodgkiss

Comments

5 Responses to “Passers-By”

  1. EnrealNo Gravatar on July 25th, 2008 1:36 pm

    This was beautiful. Elegant. I loved it

    “a love
    Long mislaid now walking near, fate
    Ascending”

    Beautiful

  2. Rob KistnerNo Gravatar on July 26th, 2008 4:15 pm

    Edward -

    What a splendid image and verse!

    The photo is heartwarming.

    “Dreams forage amongst tumbling ruins
    In dark hours.”

    The visual image evoked by the passage above is so engaging and stimulating — I love it…

  3. stan skiNo Gravatar on July 27th, 2008 7:06 am

    Ah! Precious memories.

  4. Sweet Talking Guy..No Gravatar on July 29th, 2008 10:42 am

    Yeah, this is good! And the photo is great, I like the way the shadow dancers are connected to the ‘old couple’.

    Cool poetry!

  5. veronicarommNo Gravatar on August 9th, 2008 6:19 am

    I love reading your poetry, we have such different styles and it makes it that much better. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

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